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6 days agoVery good angles and shots—the positioning of the cathedral, in particular, works well. It might be worth refining the fire effects and adding more black tones to the characters.


Very good angles and shots—the positioning of the cathedral, in particular, works well. It might be worth refining the fire effects and adding more black tones to the characters.


Thank you—do come back and share any thoughts you might have! 🙇


Thanks for pointing that out!)) Yes, that’s a typo; the previous text template had “2 st” I forgot to put it away … . 😩


Thank you, I look forward to hearing your opinion )


Ah… you mean the typo. I get it now.))


I’m not a barbarian. I wouldn’t make people read everything.))
You can understand Chapter 3 perfectly well without reading the previous ones.
Thank you so much—please do let me know what you didn’t like!)